Amy McLean
Kaleigh Spooner
WRTG 150
October 24, 2014
Uneasy
Celebration: American Justice and Divine Mercy
I grew up in
America during the war on terror. I was only 6 years old in 2001 when the twin
towers were hit and our country suddenly became immersed in a war on terror,
and America was changed forever. I grew
up listening to concerns about Saddam Hussein and Osama bin Laden on the news
and around the dinner table. I remember when Saddam Hussein’s regime was
overthrown and he was killed, and everyone said that Osama bin Laden was even
worse, and that if we could get rid of bin Laden, we would win the war on
terror. That was not necessarily true, but that was the public consciousness.
When I learned that bin Laden was dead, I saw the news footage of thousands of
people on the streets of New York, standing on each other’s shoulders, waving
American flags and celebrating bin Laden’s death. I remember thinking that it
was a little wrong, because I remember how outraged people were when rumors
went around after 9/11 that people in Arab nations were celebrating the attack
and death of Americans. The roles were now reversed. I thought that maybe we weren’t sending the
right message to the world by being so excited that someone had died. Because
of this, I was hesitant to celebrate the Death of Osama bin Laden, even though
I knew that he was an evil man.
Like me, Patrick
Clark also has a moral hesitation to celebrating at bin Laden’s death, and he,
in his blog post American Justice and
Divine Mercy: Thoughts on Osama Bin Laden’s Death, successfully persuades
his readers, predominantly Catholics like himself, to feel the same. He does
this by using rhetorical questions, comparisons, and strong appeals to
authority.
Clark’s essay
consists largely of rhetorical questions, starting with the very first sentence,
“First, should we consider it anything more than a blind coincidence that this
momentous attack was carried out on Divine Mercy Sunday?” drawing his readers
attention to the coincidence, and asking them to evaluate its significance . He
proceeds to ask his readers many questions throughout the essay, each bringing
up new ideas and parallels that Clark’s readers probably haven’t thought
about. So this begs the question: why
phrase these new ideas as questions? Why not simply state them as facts or
thoughts or beliefs of the author, since he seems to think of them that way? By
phrasing these ideas as questions, Clark accomplishes two distinct purposes.
First, Clark knows that his ideas may be new to his reader, so by presenting an
idea as a question, he implies that the reader has the option to accept or
reject it, while at the same time implying that he, the author, whom the reader
trusts, has already accepted this idea, which is incentive for the reader to
accept it. For example, “is it appropriate for Christians to feel a little uneasy
with the outpouring of ‘solidarity’ among the American citizenry in the wake of
bin Laden’s death?” Clark uses this question to make his readers believe that
Christians should be uncomfortable
with the solidarity, because, although a reader could answer “yes, that is
entirely appropriate,” the implied answer is “no,” and a reader will feel
uncomfortable if they do not agree with that, especially if they have agreed
with the implied answers to any of the other questions Clark poses. Second, questions, especially rhetorical ones,
beg to be answered. By asking the reader a question, Clark is asking them to
actually think about what he is telling them, rather than accepting or
rejecting them at face value. These questions encourage readers to think and
come up with their own opinions about America’s reaction to bin Laden’s death. Posing the question “what are we to make of
this jubilation?” requires an answer, and immediately the reader’s brain starts
working to provide that. This is one of Clark’s main purposes: to get his
readers to think about, and hopefully accept, his conclusions and ideas. Clark
also uses these questions as an appeal to logos, because as his readers ask
themselves these questions, they realize that that they have opinions that they
have not thought deeply about, which are not logical, and thinking about the
issue is the logical conclusion. This all plays into the genre of religious
rhetoric that Clark is writing in. Religious rhetoric is characterized by moral
arguments, which Clark’s clearly is, and often includes rhetorical questions
with the intent of encouraging the audience to think more deeply about the
message.
Another rhetorical
device Clark uses to convince his readers that the celebration at bin Laden’s
death is immoral and unchristian is comparison. Clark draws comparisons between
bin Laden’s death and Christ’s death. “Can we reasonably and in good
conscience associate the bullet-hole in bin Laden’s head with the hole in
Jesus’ pierced side, from which divine justice and mercy poured out upon the
whole human race?” These parallels that
Clark draws are exaggerated, suggesting that by celebrating bin Laden’s death,
Americans are either downplaying Christ’s death, or exalting bin Laden to a
role of savior, neither of which is the intent of the celebrators, but by making
these comparisons, however exaggerated, Clark effectively villainize the
celebrators as opponents of Christ. Therefore, Clark implies, any true follower
of Christ, who opposes comparing the Lord to a mass murderer, should agree with
Clark’s idea that the celebrations at bin Laden’s execution are wrong. This
plays to the genre of the piece in that pieces of religious rhetoric normally
glorify and honor the deity of the religion, here Christ. Clark surprises his
readers by almost seeming to break with the form and characteristics that they
were expecting in his essay. This accomplishes the desire of gaining the
reader’s attention and sympathy. Attention because it is outside of the form
that was expected and sympathy because Clark implies that he is not making the
comparisons of Christ to amoral figures, but rather those celebrating are the
ones that are profaning Him. Clark’s audience are then more likely to unite
with him ideologically because they do not want to be an enemy to Christ, which
is how Clark, through these exaggerated comparisons, seems to characterize
those celebrating at bin Laden’s death. The
religious audience will also feel rage when they see their deity
unceremoniously compared to a mass murderer. Clark plays off of this anger by
directing it at those who are celebrating at bin Laden’s death. This shows how
these comparisons are overwhelming appeals to pathos, playing off of the moral
feeling and gut reactions of the readers when they see something sacred seeming
to be held in such irreverence by those who celebrate bin Laden’s death.
Patrick Clark
strengthens and backs up his highly moral, and guilt-based, argument with
strong appeals to authority, among them the Bible, St. Faustina (who instituted
the Catholic holiday of Divine Mercy Sunday, the day that this attack was
coincidentally carried out), and Pope John Paul II (who was beautified, meaning
made a saint, on the very same day that bin Laden was killed). By choosing
these authorities to reference and quote, Clark uses sources that his audience
is familiar with, and that are extremely kairotic, since bin Laden was killed
on the Divine Mercy Sunday set apart for the beatification of Pope John Paul
II. Clark’s audience is already thinking about these people, and already
respects them, so by quoting them, he appeals to something comfortable and
familiar, and audiences are more likely to accept something that they see as
comfortable and familiar, rather than completely new information. Another
purpose of Clark’s appeals to authority is that it gives his argument deeper
import. If he, a Catholic blogger, says something, there is no real reason to
believe it, but if the pope says it, then believing it is essential to eternal
salvation. By quoting these authorities, Clark is able to convince his audience
that there are important spiritual reasons to believe his ideas. The last
purpose of Clark’s appeals to authority is that these people were well
respected, and are held up as saints and examples in Catholic culture and
doctrine. As such, Catholics trying to become better look to them, their
beliefs and their lives as examples and try to emulate them. By quoting them,
Clark implies that if Faustina and John Paul II were still around, they would
agree with him and support his argument, and encourages his Catholic audience
to follow the example of these venerated saints and agree with him as well.
In conclusion,
Clark successfully uses rhetorical questions to make his audience think about the
moral issues attached to celebrating bin Laden’s death , comparisons to evoke
strong emotional responses, and appeals to authority to convince his readers
that there should be some sort of moral and religious objection to celebrating
bin Laden’s death.
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